Tuesday, February 12, 2008

play i will creat

A theme i would want in my play is good vs. evil. I woul dwant a really really evil person and a ver y good person. The good person would have cute hair and wear nice clothes with blushed cheeks. The evil person would wear a lot of black and have a scary mustache and greasy black hair. They would be very pasty and have messed up teeth that are probably pointy. hes missing an ear. He lives in a nasty masion frm the 14th century with bats and theres always lightnigh. The good person lives in a pink and yellow cottage on a sunny green hill. Theres always a hot pie cooling in the window. They have an herb garden and wear glasses. they wear aprons and have nice curly hair. The theme in my play will be a good and evil contrast.

The conflict is that the evil person is always coming down the mountain to the house of the nice lady. since hes a lonely evil person he doesnt have alot of friends or food. He sees her nice pies cooling in her window. He hears them calling out his name and he neds to eat it. She always takes a nap at 2:37 so thats when he goes and steals her pie. This is how he lives. Everyday she bakes her pie and everyday he eats it. she does not know where it goes but it makes her upset that someone woul take from such a kind heart. When she finds out who did it she says- "you shouldve asked and said you liked it!" then she invites him to bake the pies with her and they eat together eventualy he moves off the cliff and down next to her cottage and continue to bake their pie...of love =)

2 comments:

Annie said...

I like your characterization!! Is the guy really evil or just lonely? Or maybe just hungry. Maybe both. Good vs. Evil can always be fun to write about and there is so much you can do with a broad theme.

j.Irv said...

HAHAHAHAHA!! I like it. Your guys sounds really creepy. Pasty, greasy and a big mustache combined equals one sad, lonely kid. I think the girl should shave his moustache, shampoo his hair and take him to a dentist when they hook up. The girl seems nice, I wish i could meet her and eat some of her pie. Your idea is kind of similar to annies did you copy hers?? are yooooouu the one who is jealous??